EDITOR

DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING, BOOK EDITING,
AND WRITING SERVICES FOR AUTHORS

 

Are you struggling to find an editor who will respect your vision?

Do you want to work with someone who returns your manuscript—and it still sounds like you?

I know I do, so that’s why my editing services put your voice, style, and story first.

This is your book, and you can reach more readers after a polish that honors your story’s heart.

 
 
 

RESERVE YOUR SPOT

 

 

 

HOW DOES THIS WORK

 

1. Request a free 2,000-word editing sample (Optional)

2. No AI-generated content accepted

3. Discuss needed editing

4. Submit a $210 reservation fee through Stripe or PayPal

5. Discuss and agree on your contract, editing deadline, and weekly payments

6. Submit your project’s weekly payments. Reservation fee is not included in project’s total

7. Receive an invoice and 10,000 words of edited content each week

8. Give a testimonial (Optional)

9. Discuss further editing services (Optional)

 

“She is truly the best developmental editor I have ever had, and I wouldn’t dream of giving my next manuscript to anyone else.”

– L.M. B

 

HELLO 👽

 

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I’m Deon Ashleigh. (It used to be Ashleigh Bonner.) I was born in Michigan, love Bran Flakes,

and I’m a traveler at heart. I’ve lived in many states and countries and plan to visit hundreds more.

The world is big, beautiful, and vibrant; why not see all that genius?

So, editing. Love it. I’ve been writing sci-fi for thirteen years and professionally editing content for nine.

Helping authors like yourself birth new books into the world is one of my greatest pleasures.

The world always needs new books.

With the assistance of my trusty Chicago Manual of Style, I am excited to be your book editor,

help you highlight the gems in your work, and

turn your message into a masterpiece.

 

 

SERVICES & RATES

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Note: For all editing services, rates for the second
or third passes are the same as the first.

 

LONG-TERM MENTORING LAB Have more questions? Still feeling lost? Want a do-it-with-you editor? I hear you, so I’ve created a highly supportive program that provides assistance for a month. Save time, gain clarity, and create better stories with a highly experienced editor at your side. The Long-Term Mentoring Lab includes: – Four 30-minute video calls, phone calls, chats, or emails per month ($300) – Three mini editing courses. A bonus course for you ($350) – 5,000-word editing sample. Bonus 3,000 words ($250) – 8,000 words of chapter-by-chapter editing ($320) – Q&A. Ask writing- or editing-related questions – Big- and small-picture comments – Weekly accountability check-ins – Brainstorm ideas together – Three marketing resources – 100% money-back guarantee $999 per month ($1,220 value)

JOIN THE LAB

 

CONFUSED ABOUT
WHAT TO DO NEXT

Stuck on a chapter?

Wondering what to do with a wayward character?

Don’t know how to make the plot work?

Frustrated with your progress?

 

You can book one-off sessions with me.

 

$75/30 minutes

$100/30 minutes – receive related resources after each session

 

BOOK A SESSION

 

GET A QUOTE

($210 reservation fee added to service’s cost)

 

 

 

 


NOTE: Payment due upon completion of weekly installment or short project.
Must be paid before completed work is sent.

The reservation fee of $210 is a separate charge added to the service's total.
Non-negotiable.

 

Need a custom order? We can find the one that works for you.

 

CONTACT ME

 

 

 

"I was blown away by Deon Ashleigh's feedback, insight, and professionalism. Her notes and advice are the perfect tools to help navigate editing. No complaints!"

– Charlie Muse, Life and Death

PORTFOLIO

Chrysalis by Rie Anders. Polished by book editor Ashleigh Bonner.
Chrysalis by Rie Anders

 

As a book editor, I have worked on many projects. Browse through samples of books I have edited and back jacket copy I have written. Over the years, I have created content in many niches, including gaming, finance, pets, and more.

 

See my full portfolio

 

"Deon's worth can be measured in gold. She is a consummate professional with a keen eye, and it's ultimately better to hear these things from an editor than from a reviewer. Look no further."

– L.M. Bennett, Wax and Wane

 
 

True Blue by Rie Anders - book cover - select for Amazon page

True Blue by Rie Anders

Wren loves Dax. Her brother hates him. And so she has a decision to make: Love or loyalty. Will she make the right choice—or lose them both?

4.9 out of 5 Stars

Chrysalis by Rie Anders - book cover - select for Amazon page

Chrysalis by Rie Anders

Charlotte's unhappy. Between her distant fiancé, dead-end career, and demanding family, she's forgotten how to feel joy. How to feel connected. But that all changes when she discovers two things: pole dancing and Paxton.

Will Charlotte become the butterfly she was meant to be—or stay safe on the ground?

4.4 out of 5 Stars

Wax and Wane by L.M. Bennett

Wax and Wane by L.M. Bennett - book cover - select for Amazon page

Lane's turning 40, and she's scared. Will a date with a younger woman soothe her fears, or will past secrets hijack her future?

4.3 out of 5 Stars

Beneath your beautiful by alex benkast

Beneath your beautiful by Alex Benkast - book cover - select for Amazon page

Jaya's had a lifetime of hard knocks, and her guarded heart's prepared her for more, but when supermodel Noah walks into her life, he leaves her wholly—unprepared.

5 out of 5 Stars

The Stench of Fear by Sue Denver

The Stench of Fear by Sue Denver - book cover - select for Amazon page

Sara's on the hunt for a hunter who's killing women. She's got a big secret no one can find out, but that won't stop her from fighting evil. And yet, what if someone does find out?

4.3 out of 5 Stars

Slowly, All at Once by Rie Anders

Slowly, All at Once by Rie Anders - book cover - select for Amazon page

Camille's homeless. Broke. Lost. She's spent her life riding horses and hosting fundraisers, yet has nothing to show for it—except guilt and regret. But now, she's determined to create her future. So she must ask for Jacob's help. Jacob. The man who hates her.

It's been years since she shattered their life together. But maybe, just maybe, they can find what they lost.

4.4 out of 5 Stars

Werewolf for Hire by Sue Denver

Werewolf for Hire by Sue Denver - book cover - select for Amazon page

Someone's out to murder Lillian, and she doesn't know who. So she reaches out to Sara, private investigator and crime-fighting werewolf. When the murderer sets out to murder Sara and Lillian, can Sara save either of them?

4.5 out of 5 Stars

Betrayal in Oklahoma by Sue Denver

Betrayal in Oklahoma by Sue Denver - book cover - select for Amazon page

A little boy is in danger. Kidnapped by dangerous criminals working for a child traffiking ring. And Sara is on the case, using all of her werewolf abilities to track him down. Will she fail or succeed?

4.2 out of 5 Stars

Naughty and Nice by Rie Anders

Naughty and Nice by Rie Anders - book cover - select for Amazon page

Holly's future is broken. Ford's past is haunted. Can they heal each other and fix their present?

4.6 out of 5 Stars

Curiosity Kills by Sue Denver

Curiosity Kills by Sue Denver - book cover - select for Amazon page

Sara's getting better in her world-saving skills. She's saved five people now and fully intends to rescue a brilliant university student from criminals. But she's got a lot to learn—because they have billions, and her old strategies will not work.

4.2 out of 5 Stars

SAMPLE EDITS

Developmental Edit - page one - True Blue
True Blue - Developmental Edit 1
Developmental Edit - True Blue
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EDITING AND WRITING REVIEWS

 

"Deon Ashleigh is reliable, professional, and fun to work with. Having someone pick apart your book can be daunting, so I greatly appreciated that she balanced her invaluable critical feedback with humor.

She clearly tells you what’s working and what’s not, and is an incredibly thorough and knowledgeable editor.

Deon not only helped me strengthen my writing but also helped me ensure my language is inclusive. Thanks to her feedback, I was able to revise my manuscript into a novel I'm proud of." ♥

– Alex Benkast, Beneath Your Beautiful

 

"Deon Ashleigh is an incredibly talented and skilled editor. She is professional and provides constructive developmental edits that really make my stories come alive.

I say, ‘I am a great storyteller, and Deon makes me a great writer.’

She not only focuses on grammar and punctuation but also provides feedback from a reader’s perspective that is always invaluable to the content I am writing.

I am 100% convinced I have found a true business partner for my work."

– Rie A., Chrysalis, True Blue, Naughty & Nice, Slowly, All at Once

 

“Deon Ashleigh is an amazing content writer. We have asked her to write so many articles with many different topics and each and every article she puts forth enormous care. We hope to work with her in the future when we create new projects.”

– Upwork Client, NY Stealth

 

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Fun fact: According to PowerReviews (2018), 97% of consumers depend on reviews to inform purchase decisions. Here's what clients have said about me:

 

"I recommend Deon Ashleigh to you as an excellent editor at each step in the review of a manuscript. I've enjoyed her feedback on three of my manuscripts.

Deon is very thorough and professional, especially when dealing with new or emerging writers. She is timely in her responses, and her comments are specific and detailed.

She is approachable with a great human touch and makes work almost seem like fun. Deon is always the first person I approach with a new manuscript."

- Mike Duree, Smooth Landing, Syria, The Other Wilkinson, Trails Now Forgotten

 

"Look, I'm not going to pretend I was happy to see Deon Ashleigh's notes. However, I read through what she had written and came away with the impression that Deon looked over my manuscript with great care, exceptional insight, and humor!

Deon's worth can be measured in gold. She is truly the best developmental editor I have ever had, and I wouldn't dream of giving my next manuscript to anyone else. Right now, though, I'm going to go lick my wounds!

Deon is a consummate professional with a keen eye, and it's ultimately better to hear these things from an editor than from a reviewer. Look no further."

– L.M. Bennett, Wax and Wane

 

"Thank you for the phenomenal editing. Looks spectacular. I'm glad I chose you and will keep you as my editor. Easy enough and straightforward choice.

Can't wait to work with you again soon."

- Ryan Witwicki, Hartz Tale: The Lone Wolf and The Orphan Boy

 

"I enjoyed the feedback from Deon Ashleigh, and her comments were quite helpful. Her time frame was longer than initially agreed upon. Overall, I did like her critique style though and would recommend based on that."

- Jenelle T.

 

"We hired Deon Ashleigh to write a sample article for us. She was able to turn it around a day early—even under a tight deadline. Her work required minimal editing and followed all guidelines. I enjoyed working with Deon and will keep her top of mind for future work."

- Obtainium

 

"Great content. Very well written and followed instructions well. She knows how to write conversationally and make the reader excited."

- The Content King

 

 

IMPROVE YOUR MANUSCRIPT WITH
DEON ASHLEIGH

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2,000-word editing sample: Free
Discounts:
Returning clients
Reserve spot (separate from project total):
$210